Edit 4

We need to add the voice over of voicemails then we will be nearly complete. We have changed the font to our chosen one and added them onto separate black slides. We also added the film production company at the beginning. We decided to add the text on different slides for more effect. We still put the text in white and had a black background.

Music: November - Bensound.com

Edit 3

We added the text without changing the position of it, colour or font.





We haver loosed at the colour of the font. With most of the setting being quite dark, it can e hard to see the text if black. We are going to use white text because it is clear and represents innocence.

Edit 2

We redone some  of the shots because they were too still and we needed movement. We are filming in our school because the surrounding and similar and we will not be filming my face so we do not need my sister.



We have to take the sound out of the added clips and then add the text. Redoing the shots was complicated because we weren't in the same location so we had to make sure we did't get too much background in. By redoing these shots, we could use our knowledge of camera angles and creating the right mood and made sure it creates tension and also movement.

Filming edits

We have decided to add some fade to blacks. This gives the sense that Quinn is looking to each side and blinking, which creates a more humane feeling surrounding Quinn. It can then be used to make the audience further relate to the characters.

We have also added fade to/from black at the beginning and end. This adds to the mystery of what she is going to do and also create a tense atmosphere.

Raw filming footage

This is the first time we filmed it. We were confident with the shots because we had taken so long developing our storyboard so it was just a case of going out and filming. The weather was perfect for it because it was windy and rainy so this set the depressive mood. We had checked the weather before and this was exactly what we wanted. Our angles were perfect because they show things around her, her features ad also things which hint towards the narrative - suicide. We noticed teh wind was making it very noisy so we are going to make sure it is a quiet noise in the back ground to enable the voicemails to be heard. We are going to redo shot 3, 6, 7 and 15 because the shots are too jumpy and it hinders the flow.

Practise filming

I practised some of my shots in my house with my sister and mum. This helped me learn how to use the camera. I could also check out some of the shots I was going to be using and this helped me gain confidence. I also took some shots of stuff like close dos, extreme close ups and mid shots.